Showing posts with label Flash Fiction Friday.. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Flash Fiction Friday.. Show all posts

Friday, 13 June 2014

Fiction

I love reading the Fantasy Fiction stories PK hosts. I always look in, though not always on a Friday. I did write a couple for PK and was thinking about writing another one but when I looked them out I remembered how bloody hard it is to write fiction. 

Also I remember Spanky (sadly no longer blogging) starting "Flash Fiction Friday" He posted a picture and the challenge was to come up with so many words (can't remember exact number) to go with the picture. I only did a couple because I found it hard.

Here's two I did....


He rejected me. I feel stupid, he's so busy, I should have known.

I thought it would please him, I've planned it for days, chores undone, misplaced socks, crumpled shirts, the dress hire shop, fancy dress party I'd lied, and finally the note on the kitchen table detailing my failings, surely I deserved to be punished. But he didn't punish, he asked what was for dinner, said if I was too pushed we'd hire a domestic, said the uniform was nice and sat down with his laptop. I'm upstairs now, he'll come looking for me I know he will, he loves me.




No family, neighbours, tourists, trekkers, nobody except us, the birds, insects and the water crashing onto the rocks.....how many times have I been prostrate on the bed with his cane or strap lashing across my bottom wanting to really SHOUT.....or GASP aloud when I've felt him hard against my punished cheeks…or SCREAM in ecstasy when he's entered me. How many times have I dreamed of a log cabin with a waterfall to kill the sound. And now we're here and its just too breathtakingly beautiful neither of us wants to spank or shag.

Real life is so much easier to write because it's all done for you.

Have a fun weekend.

Ronnie
xx