He rejected me. I feel stupid, he's so busy, I should have known.
I thought it would please him, I've planned it for days, chores undone, misplaced socks, crumpled shirts, the dress hire shop, fancy dress party I'd lied, and finally the note on the kitchen table detailing my failings, surely I deserved to be punished. But he didn't punish, he asked what was for dinner, said if I was too pushed we'd hire a domestic, said the uniform was nice and sat down with his laptop. I'm upstairs now, he'll come looking for me I know he will, he loves me.
Ronnie
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14 comments:
Welcome back Ronni! This post packed a lot of emotion into just a few words; I liked it!
Good plot with so much desperation. I ache for the poor thing. You and Poppy were on a similar wavelength.
What a cute outfit! Some guys just don't get it!
Hugs,
Hermione
I liked this a lot. It's amazing at all of the different scenarios that come out of one picture.
Very emotional story revealing the distance created by indifference.
LS
Ronnie: Very good writing. You really did a good job. Enjoyed reading it.
FD
All that and no spankin?? The hell you say. ;)
I felt her frustration. Nice one, Ronnie!
Personally I would like NEVER miss a French Maid laying bottom up anywhere !! Great little tale , Thanks for your comment also Ronnie x
Spanky - Thanks. Excellent FFF's again this week.
KayLynn - Your right about Poppy's, we were on the same wavelengh. I enjoyed your FF.
Hermione - I have one similar and I might just have to put it to use now :)
Measha - I very much enjoyed yours. Each one is different.
LS - Thank you.
FD - Glad you enjoyed it.
Luna - Thank you for saying that, it's exactly what I was trying for.
MarQe's Study - I'm sure you wouldn't. Thanks.
Thank you all for taking time to stop by.
Love.
Ronnie
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Enjoyed the short story! Good job!
Yeah I think she is just fooling herself. (But I might be a little prejudiced.) Anyway, very nicely written.
Kitten - Hi, thanks.
The Temptress - hello and welcome. Thanks, your FFF was very good.
Thank you both for stopping by.
Love.
Ronnie
xx
Fantastic flash fiction once again Ronnie,I really do enjoy the pictures you find and the little stories that go along with it!
I hope this maid one day finds the punishment she desires ;-)
hugs
Mrs M
Mrs M - hello. Thank you. Not my pic, this story was for Flash Fiction Friday started by Spanky and Tiggs.
Pop over to Spanky's and read other FFF's there excellent and maybe join in.
Thanks for stopping by.
Ronnie
xx
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