I can't repeat the story because I don't have permission but it was well written and believable except for the way the caning, which was quite strict, was entered into, with absolutely no preconditioning or warmup of any sort. Now there's nothing wrong with that per se, in my opinion, but the girl in question finds herself at the end of the story dissecting her experience and already having longings for her second caning. Can that be, I ask myself, as one not unaccustomed to the sting of rattan over several years.
I suppose it's possible but most people I hear from who've tried the cane and rejected it find it too harsh, too much of a shock and I always wonder if it's been applied too forcefully by the user, perhaps inexperienced, and therefore made a bad first impression which is hard to get over. It maybe a pity for some who don't persevere because, given time and patience on both sides, the cane really can be quite seductive if a little scary.
P once told me it was a bit like olives (it's a joke between us) it takes a while to get used to so start off with mild ones and build up. Personally I think it's also like fine wine, it gets better with age and should be chosen carefully to fit the occasion.
If I get permission, which I've asked for, I'll post the account.
Have a fun weekend.