Friday, 4 September 2009

Flash Fiction Friday

Spanky and Tiggs have come up with a great idea called Flash Fiction Friday. This week's challenge was set by Tiggs. Don't forget to stop by their blogs.

Here's my little Fiction -

No family, neighbours, tourists, trekkers, nobody except us, the birds, insects and the water crashing onto the rocks.....how many times have I been prostrate on the bed with his cane or strap lashing across my bottom wanting to really SHOUT.....or GASP aloud when I've felt him hard against my punished cheeks…or SCREAM in ecstasy when he's entered me. How many times have I dreamed of a log cabin with a waterfall to kill the sound. And now we're here and its just too breathtakingly beautiful neither of us wants to spank or shag.


Ronnie

xx

20 comments:

Spanky said...

That was great! I really liked the twist in thelast line!

selkie said...

grins.... best laid plans...

Tiggs said...

Awesome! Loved the twist, but equally all the stuff before it, lol! We were kinda on the same page with this one...

Luna Mauvaise said...

I know this feeling...wishing for something to kill the sound. Lovely piece!

xoxo
~Luna

Daisychain said...

LOL, Yes, with you here, Ronnie, except for one thing, we actually booked a holiday on a private mountain in a log cabin...absolute privacy....was awesome alright....but it didnt stop us doing what we wanted....LOL
Hugs, Daisy xxxxxxxxx

Fabsterrant said...

You really captivated my attention. Read it five times slowly and became lustfull,lol. In the ending sumation its a love story. The start is so honest about a captivating need with lust. The ending just tells me to read it again and again. Stuck in the revolving door.

Thanks and good luck,fab

Lessa said...

mmmmmmmmmm, now my fantasy is running wild to... now what did you do...grinnnnnnnnnn

have a wonderfull weekend...

love, Henny

FunKayLynn said...

Ronnie,

It is amazing to know that there really are aspects of life even more beautiful than sex. Although most times I conduct myself like Clark Griswold at the Grand Canyon (National Lampoons Vacation) often rushing too much to get to the finish line. Thanks for the reminder!

Hermione said...

What a waste of a perfectly good retreat! I'm sure there will be some fun after the novelty wears off.

Hugs,
Hermione

ronnie said...
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ronnie said...

Thank you all for your comments, really appreciate you stopping by.
Couldn't manage it in 69 words.

If you haven't stopped by Tiggs or Spanky's blogs please do, there are links to more FFF's

Fab - welcome, thanks for your kinds words.

Hope you all have a good weekend and to our friends over ther water, have a lovely long weekend.

Love.
Ronnie
xx

Lash said...

Hi from across the pond. I hope you are having a wonderful long weekend. I loved the Fiction and having a little trouble with the twist-maybe I am too "goal orientated". Hugs, Lash

Mrs M said...

Just as all the others have said before me - fantastic flash fiction!
Loved the twist also!

hugs
Mrs M

ronnie said...

Lash - you men LOL. Not a long weekend here in the UK, more the pity. Enjoy yours.

Mrs M - Thanks, for stopping by. Enjoy your weekend.

Love.
Ronnie
xx

Mina said...

Great story Ronnie and nice how you showed how breathtaking the scene is. The waterfull picture is just gorgeous. Good build up.

Mina

Florida Dom said...

Ronnie: Very good story with a snappy ending that was a surprise. And a beautiful picture to go with it.

FD

Dante d'Amore said...


Nice!

I don't know what I find more impressive, the writing behind all these FF's or the fact that you all not only follow the rules but actually seem to enjoy the restraints they put on you. ;)

I couldn't handle it but I do love nothing more than a woman who embraces them willingly, lol.

I was starting to question Spanky's participation in all this until I realized he is the one who is doing all the restraining.

Evil man.

Pure, unadulterated evil!

I'm impressed ...

And a little jealous too because I wish I'd thought of it. :)

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☼☼☼Dante☼☼☼
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Measha said...

Very original, and the ending was excellent. :-)

ronnie said...

Mina - hello and welcome. Thank you for your kind words. It was great that they were so different but your's I must say was my favourite :)

FD - thank you and yes the picture is wonderful. Have you read the other FFF stories, they are so good much better than my little effort.

Thank you both for stopping by.

Love.
Ronnie
xx

ronnie said...

Dante - How was your birthday? Hope you had a wonderful day.

LOL. Yes excellent idea, wish I had thought of it as well. Don't know how some can write one with only 69 words, I couldn't get mine to less than 68. They were so damn good.

Measha - hello and welcome. Thank you. Your FFF was excellent.

Thanks Dante, Measha, appreciate you taking time to read.

Love.
Ronnie
xx